Tuesday, December 1, 2015

Troiku Challenge #2 Morning Dew


Dear Haijin, visitors and travelers,

It's my pleasure to share a new Troiku challenge with you all. This time I have chosen another Troiku written by myself and the challenge is to write an all new troiku with the starting verse (the sleigh).

Here is the Troiku:

morning dew
vanished in a second as the sun rises -
life is short


morning dew
makes the spider web crystalline
nature's treasure


vanished in a second as the sun rises
the fragile hoarfrost on the branches -
ice skating

life is short
I see the thin grey hair of my parents
I become grey too


© Chèvrefeuille

 
  
A nice Troiku I think. The challenbge is to write/create a Troiku using the the lines of the starting verse (the sleigh) which I will give here again:

morning dew
vanished in a second as the sun rises -
life is short


© Chèvrefeuille

Well ... I am looking forward to your responses. You can respond until December 6th at noon (CET). Have fun!